My poem is about me doing stunts on my bike, tech deck, scooter, and just riding my skateboard.I had no special effects and I am just a dare devil, my audience will be so proud of me and will try to sponser me.yes I am because I tried to do my best and was practicing before I shoot the film,next time Ill try better at the stunts.
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ReplyDeleteCompliment: Good transition
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Dirt bike and music overwhelmingly loud
Compliment:Good Shots
sorry didn't know the volume
ReplyDeletethe pictures were stuck
Compliment:How bout them tricks? awesome
ReplyDeleteCriticism:Background noise of the motorcycle
Compliment:Poem was descriptive
The b-roll of you on your bike and such.
ReplyDeleteThe audio was hardly audible. Also, the poems sounds like a list to me.
I liked the music, towards the end.
I like how the music changes at the end.
ReplyDeleteBackground noise a little too loud
I like the action shots a lot
I liked your topic it was really creative!
ReplyDeleteI dont know if you put it there on purpose but the sound in the background in the begining didn't really make sense.
I liked your ending it was really cool and added a new mood to your poem.
good job
ReplyDeleteto loud on the sound of the bikes
nice b-roll
Compliment: I liked the way your poem was recited
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you could've lowered the audio, it was really loud.
Compliment: I liked all your B-Roll shots of your bike and stuff
I like your b-roll
ReplyDeleteLower your audio, it was too loud! I could not hear your voice at all
Well nice job!!
I like the background music.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be better is the content of your A-roll and the volume of your music.
I really like the stunts.
I liked the last shot!
ReplyDeleteIt's kind of hard to hear what you are saying with all the noises in the background, I think you could've turned them down a bit.
I liked the shot of you using you finger skateboard
Compliment: I liked the way you said the poem.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: It was hard to understand you because of the loud sound effects.
Compliment: I liked the poem itself. It was good.
Good B-Roll.
ReplyDeleteThe audio was very bad, you may want to go somewhere quiet, and the part when you do a Papa Willie I couldn't even hear you.
nice B-roll
ReplyDeleteAudio was TOO LOUD!!!!!
great job
Great photos of your trophies! I saw the one we got from Robotics back in 2012 haha. You could've turned the background audio down a little it was hard to hear your poem. I liked the shot of you playing with your tech deck the angle was cool.
ReplyDeleteVisuals were great.
ReplyDeleteMusic much to loud and poems visuals were not that organized.
Sound effects were great though.
your visuals were really nice. Could have turned down the background music and noise so we could understand what you were saying. Great background noise
ReplyDeleteI like the different b-roll.
ReplyDeleteAll the audio was uneven, it sounded bad.
I also like the words you used.
I like how you got yourself riding your bike.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is for you to talk a little louder because I cant hear you that good.
I also like the back round music.
Has good b-roll and sound effects
ReplyDeletethe noises and music cover audio and voiceover
there was good sound effects
I liked the sounds of the cars driving by
ReplyDeletebalance your audio
I liked your voice
I like the shot of the wheelie
ReplyDeleteBalance the audio
Nice shot of the teck deck
Good shots
ReplyDeleteIt is hard to hear you
good words
I like the B-Roll
ReplyDeleteThe audio was soft at the beginning the the sound effects were really loud. Also the music didn't really match.
I liked the lyrics, they matched the B-Roll